Undisclosed Desires - lyrics mistakes

Written by Lila
Tuesday, 03 November 2009 09:18
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Muse make a couple of mistakes on the lyrics of their song "Undisclosed Desires". 

For those of you who are die-hard Muse fans and hate the "new" Muse fans by way of Twilight... sorry... I'm sure this is going to piss you off, but as I see it this song is exactly what Bella would be singing to Edward with only a couple of tweaks to the lyrics.

Muse originally inpired Stephenie so I've decided that Muse was inspired by her for this song. Here's what the lyrics SHOULD'VE been:

I know you've suffered
Okay so we all know that Edward has been suffering in his head ever since he was turned into a vampire. 

But I don't want you to hide
Because seriously... she doesn't think he has anything to worry about.

You're cold and loveless
This is the first change. Not "It's cold," but "You're cold." Everyone knows that Edward is cold... but loveless? Well, he doesn't think he's loveable (okay it's a stretch, but work with me here).

I won't let you be denied
Yeah, she's going to get in his pants eventually, right???

Soothing
She's going to sooth him for sure... and make him feel all better!

I'll make you feel pure
Poor Edward has only felt evil up to this point... but she can make him feel pure because she's going to show him why he's not ALL bad... besides... they are both pure... in "that" way.

Trust me
You can be sure
She wants him to trust her... you can be sure she deserves the trust.

I want to reconcile the violence in your heart
You all know the violence in his heart, right? If not read Midnight Sun. It's alright... I'll wait.

I want to recognize your beauty's not just a mask
He's beautiful... but like she tells Jessica... he's even more beautiful behind the face.

I want to exorcise the demons from your past
He was a killer. I think that counts as "demons from your past," but seriously... he needs to move along. Like Emmet says... an eternity is a long time to dwell on it.

I want to satisfy the undisclosed desires in your heart
Undisclosed Desires? You know... Bella's blood... and her body.

You may trick others
This is the first big change. I changed it because he's never had another lover so he's not trying to just trick his lovers, but he's trying to trick everyone. Try singing it that way... it's so much better!

That you're wicked and divine
He think he's wicked because he's killed people as a vampire (among other crimes necessary to facilitate life as a vampire). Divine? He says all the time that he knows everything or that he's always right because he can read everyone's mind. I guess reading minds might not be actually divine, but it's close (and it rhymes with mine... come on now.)

You may be a sinner
Well, he's obviously a sinner... remember the vampire crimes I mentioned above?

But your innocence is mine
"innocence" is a common word used in exchange with "virginity" and she's claiming him as her own!

Please me
Show me how it's done
He definitely pleases her, but she's new at this too so he has to show her how it's done.

Tease me
Edward spends the first three books being a tease!

You are the one
Duh.

chorus... discussed earlier
I want to reconcile the violence in your heart
I want to recognize your beauty's not just a mask
I want to exorcise the demons from your past
I want to satisfy the undisclosed desires in your heart

Please me
Show me how it's done
discussed earlier

Trust me
She wants him to trust her too

You are the one
they spend the entire saga proving this one

chorus... discussed earlier
I want to reconcile the violence in your heart
I want to recognize your beauty's not just a mask
I want to exorcise the demons from your past
I want to satisfy the undisclosed desires in your heart

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And finally... here are the lyrics as they stand on the album:

I know you've suffered
But I don't want you to hide
It's cold and loveless
I won't let you be denied
Soothing
I'll make you feel pure
Trust me
You can be sure
I want to reconcile the violence in your heart
I want to recognize your beauty's not just a mask
I want to exorcise the demons from your past
I want to satisfy the undisclosed desires in your heart
You trick your lovers
That you're wicked and divine
You may be a sinner
But your innocence is mine
Please me
Show me how it's done
Tease me
You are the one
I want to reconcile the violence in your heart
I want to recognize your beauty's not just a mask
I want to exorcise the demons from your past
I want to satisfy the undisclosed desires in your heart
Please me
Show me how it's done
Trust me
You are the one
I want to reconcile the violence in your heart
I want to recognize your beauty's not just a mask
I want to exorcise the demons from your past
I want to satisfy the undisclosed desires in your heart